The rain won't stop falling. Right now it feels like forever. I think I've been moving in circles for too long. This damn rain, I can't see a thing. Somewhere in the distance there are neon lights: it's a motel for sure.
As I keep going the rain has already made it through my clothes. I'm soaking wet when I finally make it there. As I thought, it's a motel. I enter only to find there aren't any rooms left. With no other choice I hang the wet clothes and hit the bar.
People come and go without notice in these places, so I figure -if I hang around I may get a room, sooner than later-.
Inside the bar the place is deserted, except for a strange guy in a corner drinking in silence. I sit down and wait... I don't know what I´m waiting for, but I have nothing else to do than wait.
Time goes by and I can't do anything but watch it drown in an endless moment... Where am I? I've never been here before... it's that why I feel so lost? My chest, it's like someone beat it with a hammer. I can't breath, I'm suffocating... what is this place? Oh God, please tell me it isn't Hell.
As I keep going the rain has already made it through my clothes. I'm soaking wet when I finally make it there. As I thought, it's a motel. I enter only to find there aren't any rooms left. With no other choice I hang the wet clothes and hit the bar.
People come and go without notice in these places, so I figure -if I hang around I may get a room, sooner than later-.
Inside the bar the place is deserted, except for a strange guy in a corner drinking in silence. I sit down and wait... I don't know what I´m waiting for, but I have nothing else to do than wait.
Time goes by and I can't do anything but watch it drown in an endless moment... Where am I? I've never been here before... it's that why I feel so lost? My chest, it's like someone beat it with a hammer. I can't breath, I'm suffocating... what is this place? Oh God, please tell me it isn't Hell.
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Creo que por saber de antemano que se tata de unos comics cortos, no puedo dejar de pensar en sin city, pido disculpas por no saber si lo que digo es puede ser tomado como una ofensa o como un halago. sin embrago, fue un gusto leerlo y despernderse un poco de esa inavasion de blogs politicamente comprometidos y leer un corta historia sombria, que con poco dice lo justo para no empalagarnos de informacion o sentimentalismos...me gusto leerlo espero leer algo mas.... LAURA TRUJILLO aqui va la pagina para que mire el grupo y me cuente... myspace.com/luzmarinaysusesmaltesexcentricos
hey muchas gracias por tu comentario laura! la referencia a sin city es común que ocurra, es un cómic que me encanta. desde hace un tiempo cada vez que escribo algo que no sea un ensayo me he dado cuenta que cada vez hago más referencia a lo pequeño, y escribo corto.
un gusto conocerte, por cierto.
y ya ví tu página en myspace pero ya no tengo cuenta y no puedo comentar. me divertí muchísimo con el video del loro y me pareció muy bonito el del planetario. y las letras y la música, bueno, es igualmente divertido y espontáneo como hacen todo.
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